Text
ei śloka kariyācha pāñā santoṣa
tomāra hṛdayera arthe duṅhāya lāge ‘doṣa’
Synonyms
ei śloka—this verse; kariyācha—you have composed; pana santoṣa—getting satisfaction; tomara hṛdayera—of your heart; arthe—by the meaning; duṅhāya—to both; lāge dosa—there is an offense. ¶
Translation
“You have composed this introductory verse to your great satisfaction, but the meaning you have expressed is contaminated by offenses to both Lord Jagannātha and Śrī Caitanya Mahāprabhu. ¶